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I like the shape of buses.
They are the smooth-cornered,

Rectangular blocks that I
Never played with as a child.

Mine was a world of fairy dolls,
Where the sun was everlasting;

Where princesses were pink and
No-one disagreed.

Now that I am older
I like the shape of buses.
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A random poem I wrote when I was on my way to college on a, you guessed it, bus.

Their shape is pretty much the only thing I like about buses. Public tansport - faugh!

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:iconninja-penguins:
Haha another awsome poem from something so plain ^^
Defy to what they say, that the written word may not endure the beauty of what it describes.
I do say that you defy such logic to an extreme ^_^
:iconhatheny-lurey-dralaw:
Aww, thanks! That's really cool of you to say; I'm glad you liked it! :D

Hatheny

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:iconbbirdmank:
"Now that I am older
I like the shape of buses."
as depressing as that is, its inevitable - love it!

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"I'll carry this piece of you with me."
:iconhatheny-lurey-dralaw:
Thank you - thank you very much! I'm so glad you liked it!

Hatheny

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"The problems with success, frankly, are infinitely preferable to the problems of failure." - Neil Gaiman

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:icontori-margaret:
Hello - I hope you don't mind but I featured this deviation at [link] :) If you don't want it there - tell me and I'll simply take it down. Thanks.

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~+~circus whore~+~
:iconhatheny-lurey-dralaw:
Are you kidding?! Cool! I don't mind at all - I'm glad you liked it that much! :D

Hatheny

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"The problems with success, frankly, are infinitely preferable to the problems of failure." - Neil Gaiman

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:iconjeaneai:
I love it because it conveys the way we begin to appreciate simplicity as we grow because it makes our life easier, whereas when we are children we crave that which is frivolous and fantastic. Great one, I always love your work.

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:iconhatheny-lurey-dralaw:
Aww, thanks! I always feel better when I get comments like yours!

Thanks so much!

Hatheny

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"The problems with success, frankly, are infinitely preferable to the problems of failure." - Neil Gaiman

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